Cross Country
I was nervous when we were about to start the eight year old race for cross
country. I heard the horn blow loudly. That is when I had to start to run my
heart was beating faster and faster. I heard my family cheering me on and this
made me feel great and I tried my very best. The cross-country track had so
many cow hoof marks in it.
CROSS COUNTRY AT PERIA 2017
Wow Niki, what a lovely descriptive piece of writing. I really enjoyed how you made me imagine all of the sounds and feelings on the day! I wonder if you could make me imagine other things like the smells of the day? Tino Pai Niki
ReplyDeleteHi Niki. That was cool. I remember the day we went to cross country. I came 17th in the 8 year old girls it was very muddy. It was good to see you give it a try even when you were nervous, I was nervous too. I tried to hid to miss my race but Matua Ryan found me and said if I do the race and give it a go I would get a lollipop.
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